Monday, July 4, 2011

Chapter 5 Free

Jean got up, why was the door glowing? She walked slowly, fulled with excited meant and fear, 'does it open?' Jean wandered out loud. The handle appeared to be real brass, the yellow paint turned into a light wood and the purple turned into silver. Jean gasped, it was the prettiest door she had ever seen. Jean grabbed the handle,
'Password?' shrieked  a shrill voice.
'Sssshhhhh' said Jean jumping back in fright,
"don't be so loud I'll get in trouble."
"Naughty are we? Awake late, tut tut."
'What password' Jean asked ignoring the other question.
'Never heard of the password, oh my, oh my, we are in a little trouble' replied what seemed to be some one behind the door, a small mouse climbed through the key whole,
'Hello' he said in the same shrill voice,
'I am Louie the door keeper. Who are you and how do you do?'
'Um, hello Louie, my name is Jean Dorsy' replied Jean. Louie gasped
'Jean Dorsy' he mumbled, 'Do you wish to enter'
'Yes please' Jean said anxiously
 You got the password! Please, please please. Oh well done!' shrieked Louie
'Can I come in then?' asked Jean
'Hold on I will let you in now' replied Louie before he quickly scurried back through the key hole. Soon the door opened, Jean stepped through carefully...
Jean looked down at her feet and gasped,  everywhere around her little flowers grew on long strands of grass, the size of light bulbs they were. Jean ran and leaped then she spun around and fell on the ground. She lay there laughing, she had never felt so free, she picked up Louie who was now the size of a teddy bear and twirled him round and round. When she put him down again he had a dizzy look on his face as he walked blindly around and fell over. Jean giggled. When Louie got up he gave Jean a key and said
'Farewell Mrs Dorsy' and then he and the door disappeared. Jean turned and ran, where to? She had no idea...

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